OH MEADOWS!!
Oh Meadows! Amidst you I came to birth
With the lamb in the sun I played
And ran in the paddock with the foal!
Oh Meadows! Amidst you I found the soul
My life, whose love was worth
And together amidst you we stayed!
Oh Meadows! Amidst you my kids I laid
Aging slowly as they reached their goal
Their smiles brought us mirth
From birth to death, for me you prayed and my soul dissolved in you soul!!!
With the lamb in the sun I played
And ran in the paddock with the foal!
Oh Meadows! Amidst you I found the soul
My life, whose love was worth
And together amidst you we stayed!
Oh Meadows! Amidst you my kids I laid
Aging slowly as they reached their goal
Their smiles brought us mirth
From birth to death, for me you prayed and my soul dissolved in you soul!!!
posted by Soniya Ahuja at 1:18 AM
7 Comments:
very nice
I hope you visit those meadows often :)
Nice writing, i liked this one more than your one night stand..., keep writing
hey u rite damn wellll
kya poem likthi ho...
nice ritin style....
keep the goood work goin..
nice poems n a nice blog :)
hi girl.what happened.good writing i.e keep writing.let the springs of imagination flow till the end of time.came to know abt this from ur link in orkut.adios
Nice lines..
Came to ur blog thro' ur invite for writing.com
c ya around :)
Hi Soniya,
Beautiful Poems.. Absolutely liked them and went thru all your posts..
Never came to know of ur talesnts..
Keep posting.
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Aparna Pai
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